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Categories Literature > Poetry > Spiritual > Fixed


Oh, my soul though red you feel
You can’t have another pill
So much numbness they induce,
With their lies, they do seduce…

Can’t you see what they’re  about?
Mass-producing sell outs.
With a chip they want control,
But with me their plans won’t roll.

Let us see beyond one plan,
Let us live, and love…come on!
There is truth beyond this fog!
If you’ll only rise above…

So my soul you see? It’s pointless
Living life below, in blindness.
Set your sight on things above
And let yourself filled up with love.
©2009 ~ciuperci
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not sure the category is good..anyway, hope you "fish drawing people" out there enjoy it XD

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=Hades-shadow Feb 2, 2009, 3:34:42 PM
I'm glad to see you submit something ! It's been so long. Was a nice Poem too :)
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~ciuperci Feb 3, 2009, 12:55:26 PM
Thanks for the comment and for the :+fav: too
Yeah ..it's been a while since I submited something, don't know why.. I've been writting for the school magazine, mostly poems and I thought I should post something:D
I'm glad you like it, my colleagues were dense - I don't know if on purpose or not but only one girl got the message
My best friend Dany liked it the most and in a way he's the reason I submited it

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All the best things in life come packaged in a ribbon of risk. You untie the gift, you assume the risk, and equally, the joy.
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=Hades-shadow Feb 21, 2009, 5:01:49 AM
You are welcome. Perhaps they understood the message, simply chose not to like what it was saying? Ignorance is often the response to distaste. Have you been keeping up with your singing? I remember you loved singing (Though you said you wouldn't sing for me :( lol - but one day !) I hope things are still going okay for you, and that you can take pleasure in what you enjoy.
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~ciuperci Feb 25, 2009, 9:28:06 PM
yeah. i sing from time to time. mostly when I'm not feeling good so that I can be cheerful again.
well it's not that I don't want to sing to you, it's just if I record it or if I sing while talking on the phone it doesn't sound so good, guess my mic is not so good, don't know why ...anyway :hug: thanks friend , I am taking pleasure in what I do and things are going great now that Jesus helped me to get through a though time. XD
how about you? how are things for you?

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All the best things in life come packaged in a ribbon of risk. You untie the gift, you assume the risk, and equally, the joy.
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